Admission Essay Help
Every department has specific essay requirements.
Writing a Statement of Purpose usually required for graduate studies and scholarship applications.
Admission essay/personal statement essay prompts
Essays vary dramatically in a subject. However, most of them require a recounting of personal experience. The most important aspect of your essay is the subject matter.
What are your major accomplishments, and why do you consider them accomplishments? Do not limit yourself to accomplishments you have been formally recognized for since the most interesting essays often are based on accomplishments that may have been trite at the time but become crucial when placed in the context of your life. This is especially true if the scholarship committee receives a list of your credentials anyway.
Does any attribute, quality, or skill distinguish you from everyone else? How did you develop this attribute?
Consider your favorite books, movies, works of art, etc. Have these influenced your life in a meaningful way? Why are they your favorites?
What was the most difficult time in your life, and why? How did your perspective on life change as a result of the difficulty?
Have you ever struggled mightily for something and succeeded? What made you successful?
Have you ever struggled mightily for something and failed? How did you respond?
Of everything in the world, what would you most like to be doing right now? Where would you most like to be? Who, of everyone living and dead, would you most like to be with? These questions should help you realize what you love most.
What have you done outside of the classroom that demonstrates qualities sought after by universities? Of these, which means the most to you?
What are your most important extracurricular or community activities? What made you join these activities? What made you continue to contribute to them?
What are your dreams of the future? When you look back on your life in thirty years, what would it take for you to consider your life successful? What people, things, and accomplishments do you need? How does this particular scholarship fit into your plans for the future?
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Member Board of Directors at Stealth Startup
Advisor at Saffron Technology
Investor at Jawbone
Advisor at ToyTalk, Inc.
BA, Communications 1978 – 1981
CEO Ripple, creators of the Ripple Network
CEO And Co-Founder at Prosper.com
CEO and Co-Founder at E-LOAN
CEO and Co-Founder at Ripple
Bachelor of Applied Science (B.A.Sc.), Accounting and Finance 1982 – 1984
Moonshots at Google
Senior Director, Engineering at Yahoo!
Director, Information Technology at Wineshopper.com
Chief Information Officer, GM Digital Ventures at Starbucks
Master Business Administration (MBA), Business Administration, Management and Operations 2003 – 2006
Chief Merchandising Officer at Restoration Hardware
DMM, Home at Mervyns
Group Sales Manager at Macy's
BA, Industrial Arts, Retail 1980 – 1982
Recommendations to apply
I graduated from SFSU in June/1992 with a BA in Psychology and had a great experience while I was there. The classes were challenging, the people were great peers, which for some, turned out to be great friends! Besides, who can pass up a chance for enrichment & learning at a school like SFSU!
Michael Ridad, MBA ARMLead Examiner at ADP
Lead Examiner at ADP
1990 – 1992, Bachelors